Date: 16 August 2009 09:14 (UTC)
Oooh what an update! I'm glad the idea has developed because this was a fantastic chapter. I loved the first section because at first it felt really dream-like and you weren't quite sure if Jim was dreaming or reliving a memory.

*shall patiently await more* :D
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