Date: 30 July 2009 16:15 (UTC)
*waves*! Hello! I decided to comment on your story over here on LJ instead of FFN too!

And oh wow what a punchy start! I love how you've written Bones here, and the final section of this chapter was brilliantly written. The whole thing just came alive in my head but then that last chunk just brought home how awful it would be to witness your best friend in such a state.

Can't wait for the next part.
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