Date: 29 July 2009 06:07 (UTC)
I just loved your description of the chaos--the smoke, the screeching, the lurching. Very vivid and wonderfully done. Oh, yeah. I also love hurt Jim stories and this one is a doozy! Thanks for sharing. Can't wait for part 2.
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